- Blogging Health Check 2 -

On my second Blogging Health Check I received 13 marks which is quite an improvement from my previous mark.

Here is a comment that my teacher left:
Kenny, your blog has lots of promise and has really improved since the last health check - well done! With 38 posts, you are mostly up to date although some posts are empty or incomplete, which you will need to look at. There is lots of promise here however but the detail in each post (and how it is presented) needs to be more consistent if you are to increase your mark.

Here are my strengths.:
Some evidence of r&p
Some appropriate and effective use of ICT
Some detail in your individual posts to show your understanding and engagement

Here are my weaknesses:
Key planning tasks missing
Presentation - you don't fully title your posts which affects the presentation of the content. The moderator won't have the checklist so you need to make sure you give each post a clear and appropriate title
ICT - although you are beginning to use ICT to present ideas it isn't consistent and the planning tasks rely mostly on typing text directly into the post
Haphazard order in presenting work
Incomplete posts

These are my targets:
1. complete key planning tasks 28/34/35/36/37/38
2. update and finish any tasks 29/32 and 36
3.re-title posts using the check list and pitch task list to help guide you
4. continue to be creative and consistent in your use of ICT to present ideas

Although I have improved from my last Blogging Health Check, there are still many things that are lacking in my blogs which are preventing me to getting the best possible grades for myself. In order to change this I will try to complete all my targets and make sure my blog posts are detailed.