David, you show lots of potential in class and work really well but unfortunately your blog doesn't currently reflect the level or amount of work that I have observed you complete in class, and subsequently this means that you are not currently attaining a mark that I think really reflects your true potential in this subject. Please can you read through the feedback below and then complete the to do list / targets at the bottom of the page:
strengths:
- nicely presented
- some evidence of research into title sequences
weaknesses:
- lots of work missing
- content of the posts are brief and would benefit from greater detail, analysis, explanation and reflection
to do / targets for improvement:
1. complete all missing tasks with priority given to tasks 10,11,12,13,15,17
2. aim to offer more detail in your posts
3. aim to post to the blog 3 or 4 times weekly; use the lessons and workshops to post any work completed during lesson time so you can keep on top of the checklist
4. begin to use a greater range of ICT and digital apps to present your work visually
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